I am a student at Bay of Islands College in Kawakawa, New Zealand. This is a place where I share my learning.
Monday, 5 November 2018
My weekend adventure
Saturday night we were driving to Kerikeri fireworks at spring bank school we were waiting in line for a long time ordering food,glow sticks and tickets just after that we suddenly heard the music stop and the fireworks went off we rushed back to our spot recording and taking photos of the beautiful fireworks it was so cool and there was so many colorful firework they was so many it lit up the sky once they were finished we walked to the car and drove back home and hopped into bed.Waking up in the morning and getting dressed to go for a nice cold swim at the waterfalls we were dying in the hot blazing sun and our sandals were sticking to the ground,There we had made it to the beautiful clean waterfalls we quickly got dressed and we touch the water with our feet it was so cold we rushed back out.¨Last one in the water"i said.Me and my Friend Roxy dived in to the water swimming to the bombing rock and got up there.It was so cool we deiced to go to the top go by the waterfall and started jumping off.Cold and hot,freezing in the water and melting in the sun we so wanted to go back but we were not allowed go back by our self.Maybe will we came back next weekend.
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I love that you are trying to use some descriptive language to create an image in the reader's mind. It sounds like an amazing weekend watching fireworks and swimming at the waterfall. Was it Kerikeri waterfalls?
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thank mrs:)
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