Here's my explain writing hop you comment

Here's my explain writing from week 3 we have been focusing on explain writing throughout the weeks and i have been really trying to a good writing so i hope this is good enough don't be afraid to comment and please tell me what i may need to fix up thank you :)

Kia ora are you are a bully? This is the bully poster about bullying

This week in class we having been working on bullying and we have been set to do a bully poster before pink shirt day.The posters are going to be placed around the school so everyone is able to see them and so everyone can read them even if they are not from the school.

How clean is our awa?

How clean is our awa in my class we have been working on how clean is our awa slide here i have got mine i quite haven't finished the last slide just yet but i ma working on it.before this we went for a walk down town and we had a big clean up we found so much stuff and we are happy that we have clean our town up.