Monday, 12 November 2018
My trip to Paeroa bay
My week was very exciting early in the morning i jumped in to the car we travel for hours until we reached the the gas station we had some MacDonald and hoped back in the car and for a couple of hours we had reached our destination (marae) we had got welcomed in and we kissed everyone in the marae. My dad had to shell the oysters it took a long time but after that we had went to our hotel and watch television and went on to our phones and iPad and i slowly shut my eyes.
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Sounds like you had a great weekend away. Why were you there? Try to focus your writing on one moment and then describe it in more detail. What do you feel, hear, smell, see, taste? Try to create an image in the readers mind.
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