Friday 25 May 2018

Here's my explain writing hop you comment

Here's my explain writing from week 3 we have been focusing on explain writing throughout the weeks and i have been really trying to a good writing so i hope this is good enough don't be afraid to comment and please tell me what i may need to fix up thank you :)

1 comment:

  1. Hi Ocean, its Pyper here from St Patricks School in Greymouth. I really like the way how you make it easy to read but maybe next time you could maybe record over top of it so I don't have to read all of it.

    Blog ya later!!!

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