This is my full writing of melanoma#skin cancer i hope you like it.

Sun hats

Do you want to be someone who is diagnosed with skin cancer? Did you know 4000  in new Zealand are diagnosed with melanoma every year.You don’t want to be one of those people do you?Firstly: We should make sunhats for kids at a young age because you don’t want them getting affected by melanoma do you.Secondly:If we make school hats around Northland more schools in new Zealand and other countries will make sunhats for there kids at their school so they don’t get skin cancer.Finally:what is melanoma#skin cancer.New Zealand has the highest rates of melanoma.Melanoma form’s quickly over weeks while others can be slower to develop.If Melanoma is ignored, it can spread cancer to other parts of the body and become impossible to get rid of.

Firstly:We should make sunhats for kids in Northland New Zealand and everywhere in other countries so school hats can protect kids in schools and even where ever they go plus it doesn't have to be you school hat it can be a hat from school.And protect them when they go to beaches,theme parks,parks,swimming pool without shelter above you when you get out.so make sure you were sun block wherever you go!

Secondly:what will happen if we make sun hats a lot of kids will probably disagree with sun hats because they will say yuck those are ugly i don’t want to wear that,so try and convince the kids to wear the hats and tell them all about what can happen when you don’t wear sun hats.And say what won’t happen when you wear sunhats you won’t get melanoma#skin cancer and you will have healthy skin.

Finally:what is melanoma#skin cancer,New Zealand has one of the highest rate of melanoma it can form quite easy and if it’s ignored it can spread into other parts of the body. And it is impossible to get rid of,so we should make sun hats for kids at their school to protect them from melanoma#skin cancer.